| 23 |
Originality |
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I took off a couple points because there
are a couple fanfic that already deal with "Future Daria."
However, I thought it was a nifty story, and unpredictable:
I never thought Andrea would get as much to do here
since she's never in the series much. |
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| 20 |
"Trueness" to the show |
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No problem here. Interactions between
characters are the main thrust of Daria and the ones
in the story felt true, especially in the second half.
Jane's talk with Daria was touching and it showed the
depths of their friendship. |
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| 10 |
Fits the title |
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Fits the title. Ironically it isn't wonderland
for Daria. |
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| 15 |
Spelling, grammer, punctuation |
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Some missing words in the first half. |
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| 20 |
Humour |
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Quinn as a waitress, Kevin as a drunk,
Mack as a Canadian. Helen going to jail. Li as a crook.
Need I forget to add the classic DiMartino scene in
part two? |
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| 10 |
Over-all impression |
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It was a little slow going at first, but
when I got to the second half the story just clicked
for me. There was a tinge of sadness; you kind of figure
that's where Kevin and Quinn will end up. Also I could
understand the frustrations of Daria being eternally
surrounded by idiots. But in the end it was kind of
a wish fufillment, to be able to tell off all the people
- probably won't happen in the show. And hey, there's
the hope Daria will actually connect with Trent. What
more could you ask for? |
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| 98 |
Total Score |