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Contest Ratings

25 Originality
We haven't seen an alien abduction yet, and the sarcasm thing was quite original.

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10 "Trueness" to the show
My complaint is that it was so short, there wasn't a lot of room to do anything, including being true to the show. Also, would Daria really want to go back to her home at the end?

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8 Fits the title
I guess it could be considered a land of wonder, but not on an AP test or anything. :)

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13 Spelling, grammer, punctuation
There really should have been some returns in the story. I don't much care for one huge paragraph.

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10 Humour
Considering the length of the piece, I'm surprised anything was in there. But I did think that the aliens' hunting down her secret weapon of sarcasm was pretty funny.

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5 Over-all impression
Too short to be much of anything. The author should have given this piece more than 20 minutes.

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71 Total Score


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